LESSON 03 · TELL STORIES THAT SELL
Make the Customer the Hero
Practical ways to make the customer the hero of your story, with you as the wise guide who helps them win.
Customers love being the hero. Be the guide, not the star.
11 tipsEasy things to say7-day plan
11 tips that really help
These ideas come from Building a StoryBrand (Donald Miller), Pitch Anything (Oren Klaff), Made to Stick (Chip Heath and Dan Heath), and everyday practice. The first six help the most. Pick one and try it today.
TIP 1
Customers love to see themselves in the story
When the customer is the hero and you are the guide, listeners picture their own success.
TRY THIS
Rewrite one story this way.
TIP 2
Place the customer at the centre
Describe their goals, fears and choices first, and your product second.
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Start the story with their name or role.
TIP 3
You are the guide not the hero
A good guide gives a plan and support, while the hero makes the brave choices.
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Describe your role in one line.
TIP 4
Show their courage
Highlight the decision they made to try something new, because that is what the listener must also do.
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Mention the moment they decided.
TIP 5
Let them speak in the story
A short quote from the customer adds authenticity and shifts the spotlight to them.
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Add one real line.
TIP 6
Describe the change in them
Show how they felt before and after, not only what happened to the numbers.
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Add a feeling word.
TIP 7
Give them the credit
Say they did the hard work and you supported, which makes the story humble and credible.
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Use their name in the win.
TIP 8
Use before-and-after contrast
Showing life before and after your help makes the improvement obvious.
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Write two sentences for each.
TIP 9
Match the hero to your listener
Choose a customer similar to the person you are speaking with so they relate quickly.
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Pick the closest example.
TIP 10
Get permission to share
Always ask before telling a real customer story, or change identifying details.
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Send a short request.
TIP 11
Avoid bragging
Keep the tone grateful and factual so the story builds trust rather than ego.
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Check your wording.
Easy things to say
When you are stuck, pick one of these. They work in many sales conversations.
HERO
“You are the person who keeps this shop running.”
GUIDE
“I have helped many owners in your position.”
PLAN
“Here is a simple three-step plan.”
CALL
“Would you like to try the first step?”
WIN
“Imagine what it would be like when it is done.”
THANKS
“Thank you for letting me help.”
Your first week
One small action a day. Each day is only a little bigger than the last.
DAY 1
Write your customer as the hero in one sentence
DAY 2
Describe their problem in their words
DAY 3
Define your role as guide
DAY 5
Add a call to action
DAY 7
Test it on a customer
Further reading
- Building a StoryBrand (Donald Miller)
- Pitch Anything (Oren Klaff)
- Made to Stick (Chip Heath and Dan Heath)
The tips above are written in our own words and are general guidance. The books are suggestions for further reading.
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- Case Studies People Actually Read
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- Cut the Jargon
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- Make the Benefit Obvious
- Use Simple Words and Short Sentences
- The Message Test: Can They Repeat It?
- Open With a Hook
- The Three-Point Presentation
- Slides That Support, Not Distract
- Demo the Result, Not the Features
- Use Pauses Like a Pro
- Handle Questions Mid-Presentation
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- Use Your Hands and Eyes
- Control Your Pace Under Pressure
- Recover From a Slip
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- Add a Clear Next Step
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