LESSON 35 · TELL STORIES THAT SELL
A One-Page Proposal That Wins
Practical ways to write a one-page proposal that wins, clear enough to read in two minutes.
Short proposals get read. One page, one decision.
10 tipsEasy things to say7-day plan
10 tips that really help
These ideas come from Building a StoryBrand (Donald Miller), Pitch Anything (Oren Klaff), Made to Stick (Chip Heath and Dan Heath), and everyday practice. The first six help the most. Pick one and try it today.
TIP 1
One page is usually enough
Busy buyers prefer a short, clear proposal they can read in minutes.
TRY THIS
Aim for one page.
TIP 2
Start with their goal
Open by restating what they want to achieve, using their own words.
TRY THIS
Quote their phrase.
TIP 3
Describe the solution in plain words
Explain what you will do in simple bullet points anyone can follow.
TIP 4
Show the benefit and result
State what they will gain, ideally with a number or example.
TIP 5
Include a simple timeline
Clear dates make the plan feel real and reduce uncertainty.
TIP 6
State the price clearly
A simple table with no surprises builds trust.
TRY THIS
List what is included.
TIP 7
Add proof
A short quote or case study supports your claims.
TRY THIS
Choose the most relevant.
TIP 8
End with a clear next step
Tell them how to say yes, such as reply or sign here.
TIP 9
Keep the design clean
White space and simple fonts make it easy to read.
TIP 10
Send promptly and follow up
Speed shows care, and a follow-up call keeps momentum.
Easy things to say
When you are stuck, pick one of these. They work in many sales conversations.
OPEN
“You told us late deliveries cost you hours.”
PLAN
“Here is our three-step plan.”
PRICE
“The investment is clear and fixed.”
PROOF
“Here is what a similar customer achieved.”
NEXT
“To start, we only need your approval.”
THANKS
“Thank you for considering us.”
Your first week
One small action a day. Each day is only a little bigger than the last.
DAY 1
List what must be on the page
DAY 3
Add the problem in their words
DAY 5
Add price and next step
Further reading
- Building a StoryBrand (Donald Miller)
- Pitch Anything (Oren Klaff)
- Made to Stick (Chip Heath and Dan Heath)
The tips above are written in our own words and are general guidance. The books are suggestions for further reading.
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- Add a Clear Next Step
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