LESSON 35 · TELL STORIES THAT SELL

A One-Page Proposal That Wins

Practical ways to write a one-page proposal that wins, clear enough to read in two minutes.

Short proposals get read. One page, one decision.

10 tipsEasy things to say7-day plan

10 tips that really help

These ideas come from Building a StoryBrand (Donald Miller), Pitch Anything (Oren Klaff), Made to Stick (Chip Heath and Dan Heath), and everyday practice. The first six help the most. Pick one and try it today.

Photo for the tip: One page is usually enough
TIP 1

One page is usually enough

Busy buyers prefer a short, clear proposal they can read in minutes.

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Aim for one page.
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TIP 2

Start with their goal

Open by restating what they want to achieve, using their own words.

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Quote their phrase.
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TIP 3

Describe the solution in plain words

Explain what you will do in simple bullet points anyone can follow.

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Avoid jargon.
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TIP 4

Show the benefit and result

State what they will gain, ideally with a number or example.

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Add one figure.
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TIP 5

Include a simple timeline

Clear dates make the plan feel real and reduce uncertainty.

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Be realistic.
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TIP 6

State the price clearly

A simple table with no surprises builds trust.

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List what is included.
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TIP 7

Add proof

A short quote or case study supports your claims.

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Choose the most relevant.
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TIP 8

End with a clear next step

Tell them how to say yes, such as reply or sign here.

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Make it easy.
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TIP 9

Keep the design clean

White space and simple fonts make it easy to read.

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Use a template.
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TIP 10

Send promptly and follow up

Speed shows care, and a follow-up call keeps momentum.

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Within one day.

Easy things to say

When you are stuck, pick one of these. They work in many sales conversations.

OPEN

“You told us late deliveries cost you hours.”

PLAN

“Here is our three-step plan.”

PRICE

“The investment is clear and fixed.”

PROOF

“Here is what a similar customer achieved.”

NEXT

“To start, we only need your approval.”

THANKS

“Thank you for considering us.”

Your first week

One small action a day. Each day is only a little bigger than the last.

DAY 1
List what must be on the page
DAY 2
Write the headline
DAY 3
Add the problem in their words
DAY 4
Add your plan
DAY 5
Add price and next step
DAY 6
Trim to one page
DAY 7
Ask for feedback

Further reading

  • Building a StoryBrand (Donald Miller)
  • Pitch Anything (Oren Klaff)
  • Made to Stick (Chip Heath and Dan Heath)

The tips above are written in our own words and are general guidance. The books are suggestions for further reading.

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  1. Why Stories Beat Statistics
  2. The Simple Story Shape: Problem, Struggle, Win
  3. Make the Customer the Hero
  4. Find Stories in Your Everyday Work
  5. Keep It Short, Keep It Real
  6. Add One Vivid Detail
  7. End Every Story With a Point
  8. Collect Stories While They Are Fresh
  9. The Before, During and After Story
  10. Use Real Numbers Honestly
  11. Tell a Story Like Your Customer Would
  12. Match the Story to the Buyer
  13. Case Studies People Actually Read
  14. Ask for Testimonials Without Awkwardness
  15. Your Ten-Second Introduction
  16. The One-Sentence Pitch
  17. Cut the Jargon
  18. Lead With the Problem You Solve
  19. Make the Benefit Obvious
  20. Use Simple Words and Short Sentences
  21. The Message Test: Can They Repeat It?
  22. Open With a Hook
  23. The Three-Point Presentation
  24. Slides That Support, Not Distract
  25. Demo the Result, Not the Features
  26. Use Pauses Like a Pro
  27. Handle Questions Mid-Presentation
  28. Close Your Presentation Strongly
  29. Hold the Room Without Shouting
  30. Use Your Hands and Eyes
  31. Control Your Pace Under Pressure
  32. Recover From a Slip
  33. Pitch to One Person or Twenty
  34. Pitch Over Video With Energy
  35. A One-Page Proposal That Wins
  36. Open With Their Problem, Not Your Company
  37. Show Options: Good, Better, Best
  38. Make Pricing Easy to Understand
  39. Add a Clear Next Step
  40. Proofread Like a Professional
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