LESSON 38 · TELL STORIES THAT SELL

Make Pricing Easy to Understand

Practical ways to make pricing easy to understand, because confused customers rarely buy.

Clear pricing builds trust. No surprises, no confusion.

10 tipsEasy things to say7-day plan

10 tips that really help

These ideas come from Building a StoryBrand (Donald Miller), Pitch Anything (Oren Klaff), Made to Stick (Chip Heath and Dan Heath), and everyday practice. The first six help the most. Pick one and try it today.

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TIP 1

Clear pricing builds trust

Confusion about cost makes buyers hesitate or leave.

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Simplify your price page.
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TIP 2

Show the total clearly

Include everything so there are no surprises later.

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State the final amount.
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TIP 3

List what is included

Bullets showing the contents help people see value.

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Add a short list.
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TIP 4

Avoid hidden fees

Surprise costs damage trust quickly, so disclose them upfront.

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Review your terms.
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TIP 5

Use simple tables

A tidy table is easier to scan than a paragraph of numbers.

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Format your prices.
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TIP 6

Offer payment options

Monthly or staged payments can make a decision easier.

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List available plans.
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TIP 7

Connect price to value

Show what the price delivers in results.

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Add a benefit line.
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TIP 8

Use consistent number formats

Same style for all figures avoids confusion.

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Check currency symbols.
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TIP 9

Explain conditions simply

Terms like deposits or renewals should be clear.

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Rewrite in plain words.
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TIP 10

Invite questions

Say you are happy to explain anything about pricing.

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Add a contact line.

Easy things to say

When you are stuck, pick one of these. They work in many sales conversations.

CLEAR

“The total is five thousand dollars.”

INCLUDES

“That includes setup, training and support.”

EXCLUDES

“It does not include travel.”

TERMS

“Payment is in two instalments.”

CHECK

“Is that clear?”

THANKS

“Thank you.”

Your first week

One small action a day. Each day is only a little bigger than the last.

DAY 1
List all costs
DAY 2
Show a total
DAY 3
List what is included
DAY 4
List what is not
DAY 5
Explain payment terms
DAY 6
Ask if it is clear
DAY 7
Simplify

Further reading

  • Building a StoryBrand (Donald Miller)
  • Pitch Anything (Oren Klaff)
  • Made to Stick (Chip Heath and Dan Heath)

The tips above are written in our own words and are general guidance. The books are suggestions for further reading.

More lessons in “Tell Stories That Sell”

Keep going. Small steps every day make a big change.

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  1. Why Stories Beat Statistics
  2. The Simple Story Shape: Problem, Struggle, Win
  3. Make the Customer the Hero
  4. Find Stories in Your Everyday Work
  5. Keep It Short, Keep It Real
  6. Add One Vivid Detail
  7. End Every Story With a Point
  8. Collect Stories While They Are Fresh
  9. The Before, During and After Story
  10. Use Real Numbers Honestly
  11. Tell a Story Like Your Customer Would
  12. Match the Story to the Buyer
  13. Case Studies People Actually Read
  14. Ask for Testimonials Without Awkwardness
  15. Your Ten-Second Introduction
  16. The One-Sentence Pitch
  17. Cut the Jargon
  18. Lead With the Problem You Solve
  19. Make the Benefit Obvious
  20. Use Simple Words and Short Sentences
  21. The Message Test: Can They Repeat It?
  22. Open With a Hook
  23. The Three-Point Presentation
  24. Slides That Support, Not Distract
  25. Demo the Result, Not the Features
  26. Use Pauses Like a Pro
  27. Handle Questions Mid-Presentation
  28. Close Your Presentation Strongly
  29. Hold the Room Without Shouting
  30. Use Your Hands and Eyes
  31. Control Your Pace Under Pressure
  32. Recover From a Slip
  33. Pitch to One Person or Twenty
  34. Pitch Over Video With Energy
  35. A One-Page Proposal That Wins
  36. Open With Their Problem, Not Your Company
  37. Show Options: Good, Better, Best
  38. Make Pricing Easy to Understand
  39. Add a Clear Next Step
  40. Proofread Like a Professional
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